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Overview – The Enterprise responds to a distress
call from a Federation outpost on Triacus. When they arrive, all the adults are
dead, seemingly from killing each other. Only the five children from the colony
are found, and in relatively good spirits. The away team beams the children up
to the ship to determine if they have been harmed in any way, either physically
or emotionally. When they are alone, the children summon Gorgon, a mysterious
being who congratulates them on successfully defeating their parents on the
planet, and orders them to take over the Enterprise using their special powers.
As the work their influence over the crew, Kirk must face himself with the
distinct possibility that to save his ship, he may have to kill the children.
Score: 2/10 – While the idea of children doing evil is
not new (see “Children of the Corn” and a few Steven King stories as examples),
in the 60s this may have been a relatively interesting idea. The children have
been coerced into killing their parents, and have been given special powers to
do so. The premise of the story is promising, but the script is the biggest
problem with this show, followed by the casting of lawyer Melvin Belli as Gorgon.
I found that the child actors were all convincing, for the most part, but
Melvin Belli was clearly not a trained actor. His performance is wooden, lacked
depth, and seemed more akin to a low grade middle school performance.
Apparently, Gene Roddenberry was so upset with his performance that he ordered
it to be as distorted as possible with visual and sound effects. The dialogue
is pretty dull, and Shatner gives a few performances that are over the top,
even for him. Oh, and the children work their black magic by pounding their
fists in the air like some sort of demonic rock-paper-scissors game. Not an
effective choice. Most of all, the ending of this episode bothers me. The
children finally come to grips that they are responsible for the deaths of
their parents, and are crying over it. By doing so, Gorgon is defeated, and as
he disappears from the ship, he threatens all of them with death and
destruction. When he is gone, Kirk offers a few reassuring words, and everybody
is all smiles and hugs after. The kids, who have likely been through the most
traumatic and frightening experience for anyone to endure (not just children),
are now laughing and carefree with McCoy and Kirk smiling proudly in their
midst. It just seems to me that the ending should have been much more somber.
Yes, this story was never picked up again, but it was just glossed over as
having been nothing more than a routine mission with no long lasting negative
consequences to follow. Definitely not one of Star Trek’s finest episodes.
Relevance – 0 points. Nothing in this episode relates
to anything else in any series. It is almost as if in looking back the writers
decided to leave this tale alone. Can’t blame them.
Continuity - 2 points. Character continuity is intact
here, but barely. As various crew members are shown their fears (aging
ungracefully for Uhura, disobeying direct orders for Chekov, losing the ability
to command for Kirk, and somehow an endless ring of swords on the view screen
for Sulu), they react as we would expect them to. Universe continuity also is
fine here. I am going to take a point for story continuity, as Kirk is the one
that uses the name Gorgon first, before anyone else does. Not even the entity
reveals his name. Apparently this is dealt with in a deleted scene, but
slopping editing is no excuse.
Character Development – 0 points. I am really at a
loss as to which characters actually progress or develop in this episode. The
script really does not allow for it.
Social Commentary – 2 points. OK, one redeeming
feature of this episode is that it does try to give a moral to the story. It
talks of how evil often tries to either destroy or mislead the innocent, and
what better way to show that than by having a malicious entity goad some
children into killing their parents. Spock and McCoy, in one of the better
written exchanges of the episode claim that evil seeks to maintain power by
supressing the truth or by misleading the innocent. We see that happen here,
and it is a timely warning today as it will likely always be. So while the
message is given in words, I find that it does not live up to it in the
delivery, hence 2 points instead of 3.
Cool Stuff – 1 point. I found one cool thing about
this episode. One of the children is played by Brian Tochi, who will appear
(all grown up) in a TNG episode “Night Terrors” as an ensign on the bridge.
That TNG episode is a far more enjoyable story than this one, but it is neat to
see one of the kids all grown up and still acting.
Rank – Ensign (7 points). Before I married my wife, she
had not seen many of the original Star Trek episodes, so at night we would work
through them on DVD. Sometimes she would fall asleep, and I would either try to
keep her up or turn it off and continue it the next night if it was a good one,
or let her sleep if it wasn’t. This one I let her sleep. The kids were a bit
creepy, but the rest of the episode did not live up to its potential.
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