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Overview – The Enterprise is ordered to serve as a
test vessel for a new computer system, the M5, which has been designed by the
brilliant scientist Dr. Richard Daystrom. The M5 is designed to take over the
functioning of the ship, which distresses Kirk more than a little. As the
battle drill begins, the M5 begins to act in a way that is far more than its
designer had originally intended, and Kirk and his officers are suddenly in a real
life and death scenario.
Score: 8/10 – This is a great episode, due largely to
the complex and tragic character of Richard Daystrom. Played brilliantly by
William Marshall, Daystrom is as compelling as guest stars come in Star Trek.
He is brilliant, driven, and devoted to his work. That is countered by feelings
that have given him a motive to prove himself at any cost. He used his own
engrams to make the M5 more efficient and human-like, unaware that his own
insecurities and resentment towards his lack of recent success was setting the
scene for a nervous breakdown. This leads the M5 to be a seriously flawed piece
of technology. It begins to take over non-vital ship systems, attacks
unnecessary targets, and eventually begins to attack the Federation fleet that
had been assembled as part of the test. We quickly see Daystrom’s descent into
madness and the skeleton crew left on the Enterprise scramble to retake control
of the ship from the ever-dangerous M5. All the while Kirk, Spock, and McCoy
have a philosophical look at the use of technology and its roe in humanity’s
society. There is suspense, action, drama, and even some humor mixed in. There
are also a few interesting lines that to this day cause me to raise my eyebrows
a little. Of particular note is the M-5, when describing why it cannot commit
murder, says that murder is “against the laws of man and God”. While nothing in
Star Trek has suggested that there is no religion on Earth in the 23rd
Century, this is one of the mere handful of references of God in any meaningful
context.
Relevance – 2 points. Richard Daystrom, despite his
breakdown and setback in this episode, will eventually go on to wither found or
be the inspiration for the Daystom Institute that is referenced to in the Next
Generation and subsequent sequel series. Another point is scored for Kirk
quoting from John Masefield’s poem “Sea Fever”. He recites “All I ask is a tall
ship and a star to steer her by”, which he will also recite in Star Trek V.
This line is also on the USS Defiant’s dedication plaque.
Continuity – 2 points. Character continuity is strong
here, especially among the trifecta of focus (Kirk, Spock, and McCoy). As the
idea of the M5 replacing Kirk and many of the crew on the Enterprise is
presented, Kirk shows a realistic resistance to the notion. McCoy, ever he
humanist, speaks out quite vocally against the thought of computers further
running things in his life. While initially Kirk and McCoy joke that Spock would
feel more at home with computers and machines rather than humans, Spock
responds that while computers make excellent servants, he has no desire to
serve under them. He shows that the starship runs best when the crew has
loyalty to its captain. Universe continuity also works, as once again we see
how a super intelligent computer can be more of a danger than a benefit. Story
continuity runs into a bit of a problem for me. When the M5 attacks the wargame
fleet with full power, Commodore Wesley blames Kirk for the attack. What
doesn’t work for me is that it was Wesley who ordered Kirk to have the M5
installed on the Enterprise and should have known that it was the M5 in
control, not Kirk.
Character Development – 2 points. This episode is a
good example of how to balance a phenomenal guest star while still giving the
main cast some good development. While McCoy ad Spock both get a fair bit of
screen time in this episode, this story focuses on Kirk as he tries to come to
terms with the possibility that he is not as essential to the functioning of
the ship as he had originally believed. This is shown very well when asked what
his recommendations are for an away team mission. The M5 assigns a different
junior science officer, and then does not assign McCoy or Kirk to the team.
Kirk seems a little put in his place when the M5 explains that the captain’s
presence is not necessary on this mission, which goes against Kirk’s desire to
be where the action is. Kirk still manages to show how the human soul can be
superior to a computer when he uses his instincts to save the Enterprise and
the crew still aboard from being destroyed by Commodore Wesley’s wargames fleet
by keeping the shields down, gambling that Wesley’s compassion will overrule
his orders to destroy the Enterprise.
Social Commentary – 3 points. There are several
messages or meanings that can be drawn from this episode. Most obvious is the ever-enduring
question concerning the replacing of man with machine. Kirk admits that only a
fool would stand in the way of progress, while McCoy reminds Kirk that “we are
all sorry for the other guy when he loses his job to a machine. When it comes
to your job, that’s different.” Indeed, the modernization of our society makes
more jobs obsolete causes many of us concern, and we debate whether replacing
the human element is truly a more efficient system or a better system, or even
if efficient and better are the same thing. On a different note, the character
of Daystrom provides an interesting commentary on the dangers of putting too
much pressure on oneself to repeat past success. Daystrom had great success
early in his career, leading to the many of the computer systems currently
being used in Starfleet. He resented the under-appreciation from his peers and
felt left behind as the research went on. In many fields of work and study we
may find ourselves in a similar situation, thinking that we have achieved
greatness and finding ourselves quickly left behind in our past glories. It can
be taxing to our mental health.
Cool Stuff – 2 points. One point for Dr. Daystrom. In
future series, his name is the attached to a renown research institution.
Knowing that makes this character even more compelling as we get to see the man
behind the legend. Another point is scored for the M5, which takes its place
among the most problematic computers that have threatened the crew of the
Enterprise.
Rank – Captain (19
points). A
strong and worthy episode. Daystrom is a great guest character, and there is a
little something for everyone to enjoy. I highly recommend that everyone watches
this episode.
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To be fair, the idea that Kirk might have sabotaged the M5 and took things up against Wesley's fleet to prove a point would not be that far fetched.
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